After looking at our footage we have come to the conclusion that we need something else in our film to make it more effective. We have decided to film flashbacks along with our footage in order to create a story. Our story is that Marge lost a brother in a fire, we will use her voice over as she tells a story, we will use flashbacks of fire , lighting a candle and also possibly a grave. We also hope to have a shot of an eye with flames in its reflection as we think this would be really effective.
Yaaaaay! Alice, am so pleased for you and Vali - it looks really really good for a first draft! Obviously, there're loads of icky bits you can add to enhance it but as it goes, some really great shots you've put together.
ReplyDeleteLove the blowing out of the candle with the photo and the wringing of Marge's hands.. great foundation.
Well done!