Script for Voiceover

Today we spoke to Marge and have arranged for her to do a voiceover for the film on Monday. In todays lesson we came up with a script to say:

It was 1954, the year i'll never forget (Marge looking to the side)
He told me not to go there (Lantern shot)
But I couldn't stay away, my eyes were lit up by the flames (flames/ eyes)
I went back everyday to see him (Marge on bench/entering church)
I could spend hours there, just thinking about what had happened (at grave)
The guilt hit me, just like the flames hit him (flashback of flame)
It's all a blur (flashbacks)
But now all I have to say is (flashbacks)
May he rest in peace